Hrm. The body does look a bit off, maybe ink would help to make it stand out more. My favorite features is the eyes, the mask, and hair. It's not a bad drawing, it's very nice, just maybe needs a bit of touch up work ^^

I agrey with senior rage her body looks kinda akward buy thats all thats rong with it i like it good job:)/Ragnarok is my fav online game ^_^ me my bros and my friend thats like a bro all play it /gg

its alright u just need to ink it to make the details stand out more and put form into her body it looks kinda akward.